Tuesday, December 15, 2009

While leaving me alone…


Just leave me alone, If you really hate me

With my silent tears, Which you can’t even see :(

While leaving me alone, Do think for a while

Did I ever asked you anything, more than a smile?


You were the world for me , I saw you all around

A world that crashed, and didn't make a sound

While leaving me alone, Do look into my eyes

You will see my love for you , and for me your lies


I know that you will say, It’s not your mistake

But to just tell you, My love is not a fake

While leaving me alone, You will be lonely too

I may have someone for me, Who will take care of you?


You wanted all the love, and all the care along

And I didn’t even realize, that we went so long

While leaving me alone, Please think what you want

Because you can get something, but everything you can’t…

4 comments:

Krishna said...

Awsome composition...Keep it up!!

Krishna said...

Sometimes I feel myself sumwhere in the poems!!

Unknown said...

Yeah Kd is right .... i thk i can imagine the situations reading your compositions. you get the reader so much into the scene....good work

Anoop said...

We can realy feel the emotions. Very clear. Good composition